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Hindi song team
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shanaya tiwari
2021-08-28 15:47:24 UTC
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Hi,
I want a Hindi lyricist to work with me as a team. I do singing so I am planning to make a team which gets recognition and people love it!! Also I would request if any composer is here who is willing to work in a team then please do contact me. My mail id is:- ***@gmail.com
It's my dream to perform in huge crowd so please If anybody is there as lyricist, composer, musician who also have this dream then please do contact me😊. Further details I'll inform after contacting.
Thank You!
Naseer
2021-08-28 17:54:59 UTC
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Post by shanaya tiwari
Hi,
It's my dream to perform in huge crowd so please If anybody is there as lyricist, composer, musician who also have this dream then please do contact me😊. Further details I'll inform after contacting.
Thank You!
Hi Shanaya Tiwari,

I presume you are requesting an Urdu lyricist, bearing in mind that this is an Urdu language and poetry group?

Naseer
Mohit
2021-08-30 05:38:23 UTC
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aur jinka koi dream na ho... jinki aankhein be-khwaab ho, lekin zamana madhosh ho...
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Post by shanaya tiwari
Hi,
It's my dream to perform in huge crowd so please If anybody is there as lyricist, composer, musician who also have this dream then please do contact me😊. Further details I'll inform after contacting.
Thank You!
Hi Shanaya Tiwari,
I presume you are requesting an Urdu lyricist, bearing in mind that this is an Urdu language and poetry group?
Naseer
Zoya
2021-08-30 14:37:10 UTC
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Post by Mohit
aur jinka koi dream na ho... jinki aankhein be-khwaab ho, lekin zamana madhosh ho...
Mohit,

is baat par yeh sh'er aap ki nazr:

din bhale jaisaa kaTe saaNjh samay Khwaab to dekh
chhoR ta'abiir ke KhadshoN ko, are Khwaab to dekh :)

This is by one of my young poet friends, Mohammad Ahmad, from Karachi.

_______Zoya
Mohit
2021-08-31 09:42:16 UTC
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Zoya mam, this I read long back in the newspaper, so I am not sure about the shayar's name


raat bhar khwaboN ka haseeN manzar dekha,
subah wahi takiya wahi bistar dekha...

:)
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Post by Mohit
aur jinka koi dream na ho... jinki aankhein be-khwaab ho, lekin zamana madhosh ho...
Mohit,
din bhale jaisaa kaTe saaNjh samay Khwaab to dekh
chhoR ta'abiir ke KhadshoN ko, are Khwaab to dekh :)
This is by one of my young poet friends, Mohammad Ahmad, from Karachi.
_______Zoya
Zoya
2021-09-02 16:50:46 UTC
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Post by Mohit
Zoya mam, this I read long back in the newspaper, so I am not sure about the shayar's name
raat bhar khwaboN ka haseeN manzar dekha,
subah wahi takiya wahi bistar dekha...
Very nice, Mohit. Quotable.

This immediately reminded me of a she'r by the one and only Parveen Shakir:

niiNd aa jaaye to kyaa mehfileN barpaa dekhuuN
aaNkh khul jaaye to tanhaai ka sahraa dekhuuN

Now I am switching mode and talking as Prof RK's TA, please don't mind. The she'r that you quoted is out of meter, I am taking the liberty to modify it slightly:

raat bhar KhwaaboN meN kyaa kyaa hasiiN manzar dekhuuN
subH uTh kar vohi takiyaa vohi bistar dekhuuN!

Bonus Tip: The way I fixed this, puts it in the same baHr as the Parveen Shakir she'r. It was not intentional on my part, just came naturally.

Shanaya, sorry for digressing from your original topic, but that's what us Alupers often do! :)

_______Zoya

Zoya
2021-08-30 14:12:03 UTC
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Post by shanaya tiwari
Hi,
It's my dream to perform in huge crowd so please If anybody is there as lyricist, composer, musician who also have this dream then please do contact me😊. Further details I'll inform after contacting.
Thank You!
Hi Shanaya,

This group has a very limited number of active participants currently, so I am not sure if your query will get much response. However, it doesn't hurt to reach out, you never know. One of our friends in this group, Amit Malhotra, actually writes lyrics for a Montreal based band, great work.

Keep your dreams alive.

My best to you,
Love,

_______Zoya
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